当然，我认为，这篇文章还可以写的更加全面一些。比如：这篇文章强调了会议

Of course, I think that this article can be written more comprehensively. <br>For example: This article emphasizes the necessity of speech and manner in the conference speech. But I think that the theme and content of the conference speech are more important. Before attending the meeting, we need to explain to the audience what kind of issues our speech is aimed at, and what academic value and social significance our research has. To this end, we need to ask our mentors and authoritative experts in the industry to let them provide us with some valuable suggestions. In addition, we need to revise our speech framework carefully to make it as refined and clear as possible.

Of course, I think this article can be written more comprehensively.<br>For example, this article emphasizes the need for words and manners in the conference speech. But I think the topic and content of the conference speech is more important. Before we attend the meeting, we need to explain to the audience what kind of issues our presentations are for, what academic and social significance our research is. To do this, we need to consult our mentors and industry experts and ask them to give us some valuable advice. In addition, we need to revise our framework for speaking carefully to become as refined and clear as possible.

Of course, I think this article can be more comprehensive.<br>For example, this article emphasizes the necessity of speech and behavior in conference speech. But I think the theme and content of the speech are more important. Before attending the conference, we need to explain to the audience what kind of questions our speech aims at, what academic value and social significance our research has. To this end, we need to consult our own mentors and industry experts, so that they can provide us with some valuable suggestions. In addition, we need to seriously modify the framework of our speech to make it as concise and clear as possible.